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	<title>Comments on: The Tinker Stage</title>
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		<title>By: Emily M.</title>
		<link>http://segullah.org/daily-special/the-tinker-stage/#comment-122219</link>
		<dc:creator>Emily M.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Dec 2008 05:01:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Shauna, woohoo!  That makes me so happy.   Two years ago I was polishing my essay for the Segullah contest.  I hadn&#039;t written anything since college, and had never been published.  But the contest gave me a goal to work towards, which helped motivate me.  I had felt like any writing talent I had was in mommy hibernation, and this was just what I needed to help me: something to boost my confidence, and remind me how to write, and why I love it. 

So, to anyone who hasn&#039;t written an essay since college, but would like to: if you&#039;re not planning to enter this year, start writing now for next year!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Shauna, woohoo!  That makes me so happy.   Two years ago I was polishing my essay for the Segullah contest.  I hadn&#8217;t written anything since college, and had never been published.  But the contest gave me a goal to work towards, which helped motivate me.  I had felt like any writing talent I had was in mommy hibernation, and this was just what I needed to help me: something to boost my confidence, and remind me how to write, and why I love it. </p>
<p>So, to anyone who hasn&#8217;t written an essay since college, but would like to: if you&#8217;re not planning to enter this year, start writing now for next year!</p>
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		<title>By: Shauna</title>
		<link>http://segullah.org/daily-special/the-tinker-stage/#comment-122161</link>
		<dc:creator>Shauna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Dec 2008 14:54:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The tinker stage is where I hope to be by your next contest. This blog has inspired me to put on paper all the thoughts and ideas whirring around my head I have &quot;been meaning to write&quot; for many years. 
Each day, I &quot;practice&quot;.
Thank you for inspiration.
Bring on the winners.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The tinker stage is where I hope to be by your next contest. This blog has inspired me to put on paper all the thoughts and ideas whirring around my head I have &#8220;been meaning to write&#8221; for many years.<br />
Each day, I &#8220;practice&#8221;.<br />
Thank you for inspiration.<br />
Bring on the winners.</p>
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		<title>By: Justine</title>
		<link>http://segullah.org/daily-special/the-tinker-stage/#comment-122105</link>
		<dc:creator>Justine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Dec 2008 00:24:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another helpful hint is after reading your essay aloud as you suggest, try to re-write the entire thing, as if you were starting from scratch (that means no peeking at the original!). I&#039;ve found that I often like certain sentences or paragraph structures better in the re-write that I can insert into the original. Just a thought!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another helpful hint is after reading your essay aloud as you suggest, try to re-write the entire thing, as if you were starting from scratch (that means no peeking at the original!). I&#8217;ve found that I often like certain sentences or paragraph structures better in the re-write that I can insert into the original. Just a thought!</p>
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